Deviantart

well I don't know if any of you draw or write but this is a good site to post it if you do I have a account of it check it out

Deathdarken.Deviantart.com

Do you draw?I know that site alreay but i cant draw.....

this is my new poem....



Dreams and Fades

All we have created,
came to us in a dream.
I am a fade,a illusion....
all in which i used to believe in....
are now broken bonds.

dreams to fades...
a taste then power,
we all will see the end next hour.
tomorrow to weeks,
for now i speak..
the coming of the last...
and a dream in our past.

Look back and face the track,
forget the dreams we lack,
draw the last feeling in the air...
In which we'll all fear and,draw the last tear.

its not bad but something seems not right about it I can't put my finger on it though

I know it was tricky to convert it...but yet it came from my thoughts and life dreams put into one....i'ma post the other one and i am on deviant arts

Unfinished

I feel as if i have no worries,
i just watch the storm approach.
Helplessly devoired in its coming,
cant feel,cant breath....no air.
Smoking will only bring ectasy,living will bring pain,
Life isn't about finding yourself.....
its about creating yourself...

So if thats true,
we must dream before we create.
my dream is a fade but soon....
it will become pure reality.




This one was a easy concept to grab and its about life...

that one is really deep I like it so far

Thanks, now i know i will continue to write peoms

Reality


As real as anyone can be,
we are not are trueself...
hiding from the truth,,
and make ignorance be held....

life is the beginning,
death is the end....
the more we look back on the past,...
the farther and longer the future....

there is a reason for everything...
what's the reason of life,...
i dont know what to tell you....
but i guess its for delight...

to choose our path and learn,
and make better discisions...
nothing as it seems to be,

there are No-bodies in this world...
sterning to find themselves....
life is a whirlpool's twirl...
make your own discisions and dont make anybody else.



Tricky at the end

nice nate...i got some about losses

Poetry:Feelings in which the poet expresses in written words converted to be tricky and contain confusing metaphors or other figure os speech.Inphazing Very deep ideas and thoughts.

well that sounds about right

your just not living the other side of life that we are in simple words that might not really explain what im trying to explain but yeah

well I don't know, I guess I never really have though

well umm i was talking to minato

but i deleted his stupid posts......0_0

My Cool shadow cloaked in darkness,
My hollow soul drowns in your sins,
you have caused great pain and suffering,
now, i will show you what death is!

so I did not get to read it then darn and thats not bad nice

what???i dont understand your post death^^

nice nathon...i think you should change 'cool' to 'cold' it gives more feel of the atmosphere to the poem, im not saying you have to...it's your choice

I was talking about how I did not get to read the post that was deleted before I could read it so I though that one person was talking to me but was not talking to me

Surface

There's something inside me that pulls beneath the surface,
Consume me.....(confusing)....
I feel like this is never-ending towards me....
cant see....(cant breath)...

Is there anything out there that would make me happy?....(yerning for the...morning)
Its like a self-control that i fear is never-ending.....(controlling...I cant see...)
I cant find myself again,the walls are closing in....
I felt this way before..so insecure.....

My paths are sterning...(reaforming)....
I want you to know, you are everything...(that i wanted.....i was longing....)

these "()" emphasize backgroung voices,...it could be a song o a poem.....

Snoopy wrote:

Surface

There's something inside me that pulls beneath the surface,
Consume me.....(confusing)....
I feel like this is never-ending towards me....
cant see....(cant breath)...

Is there anything out there that would make me happy?....(yerning for the...morning)
Its like a self-control that i fear is never-ending.....(controlling...I cant see...)
I cant find myself again,the walls are closing in....
I felt this way before..so insecure.....

My paths are sterning...(reaforming)....
I want you to know, you are everything...(that i wanted.....i was longing....)

these "()" emphasize backgroung voices,...it could be a song o a poem.....

is it just me or does that have Linkin park written all over it?


here are the lyrics for all of you that don't know what I'm talking about


Crawling

Crawling in my skin
These wounds they will not heal
Fear is how I fall
Confusing what is real

There’s something inside me that pulls beneath the surface,
Consuming, confusing,
This lack of self-control I fear is never ending, controlling,
I can’t seem, to find myself again
My walls are closing in
[without a sense of confidence I’m convinced
There’s just too much pressure to take]
I’ve felt this way before
So insecure

Crawling in my skin
These wounds they will not heal
Fear is how I fall
Confusing what is real

Discomfort, endlessly has pulled itself upon me
Distracting, reacting
Against my will I stand beside my own reflection
It’s haunting how I can’t seem
To find myself again
My walls are closing in
[without a sense of confidence I’m convinced
That there’s just too much pressure to take]
I’ve felt this way before
So insecure...

Crawling in my skin
These wounds they will not heal
Fear is how I fall
Confusing what is real

Crawling in my skin
These wounds they will not heal
Fear is how I fall
Confusing what is real

(there’s something inside me that pulls beneath the surface
Consuming,) confusing what is real

(this lack of self control I fear is never ending
Controlling,) confusing what is real

Wow,you know Linkin at the back of your hand.Yes,1/4 of it appeared and i just put it there

Snoopy wrote:

Wow,you know Linkin at the back of your hand.Yes,1/4 of it appeared and i just put it there

well besides minute to midnight yes I know that band fairly well I like that song and those lyrics sounded familiar but other then that it was good though