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arunathe Hokage


Number of posts: 162 Age: 15 Location: The Undying poet tree Registration date: 2008-04-24
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 | Subject: Re: Deviantart Fri May 09, 2008 11:36 am | |
| but i deleted his stupid posts......0_0 _________________ †Why do we fight wars,i told em we fought for what was right....but i soon realized there is nothing good about war but what we fight for in them† |
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arunathe Hokage


Number of posts: 162 Age: 15 Location: The Undying poet tree Registration date: 2008-04-24
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 | Subject: Re: Deviantart Fri May 09, 2008 12:05 pm | |
| My Cool shadow cloaked in darkness, My hollow soul drowns in your sins, you have caused great pain and suffering, now, i will show you what death is! _________________ †Why do we fight wars,i told em we fought for what was right....but i soon realized there is nothing good about war but what we fight for in them† |
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Deathdarken Clan Leader


Number of posts: 62 Age: 20 Location: In the confinds of my mind Registration date: 2008-04-20
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 | Subject: Re: Deviantart Sun May 11, 2008 11:58 am | |
| so I did not get to read it then darn and thats not bad nice _________________ They say that I'm a monster Say that I'm a killer But I'm human until proven guilty-Deathdarken's lyrics
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arunathe Hokage


Number of posts: 162 Age: 15 Location: The Undying poet tree Registration date: 2008-04-24
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 | Subject: Re: Deviantart Sun May 11, 2008 1:53 pm | |
| what???i dont understand your post death^^ _________________ †Why do we fight wars,i told em we fought for what was right....but i soon realized there is nothing good about war but what we fight for in them† |
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NEO_cortex Seven Swordsmen


Number of posts: 89 Age: 19 Location: engraving my destiny.....on my tomb Registration date: 2008-04-18
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 | Subject: Re: Deviantart Mon May 12, 2008 9:26 am | |
| nice nathon...i think you should change 'cool' to 'cold' it gives more feel of the atmosphere to the poem, im not saying you have to...it's your choice |
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Deathdarken Clan Leader


Number of posts: 62 Age: 20 Location: In the confinds of my mind Registration date: 2008-04-20
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 | Subject: Re: Deviantart Mon May 12, 2008 11:32 am | |
| I was talking about how I did not get to read the post that was deleted before I could read it so I though that one person was talking to me but was not talking to me _________________ They say that I'm a monster Say that I'm a killer But I'm human until proven guilty-Deathdarken's lyrics
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arunathe Hokage


Number of posts: 162 Age: 15 Location: The Undying poet tree Registration date: 2008-04-24
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 | Subject: Re: Deviantart Tue May 13, 2008 11:20 am | |
| SurfaceThere's something inside me that pulls beneath the surface, Consume me.....(confusing).... I feel like this is never-ending towards me.... cant see....(cant breath)... Is there anything out there that would make me happy?....(yerning for the...morning) Its like a self-control that i fear is never-ending.....(controlling...I cant see...) I cant find myself again,the walls are closing in.... I felt this way before..so insecure..... My paths are sterning...(reaforming).... I want you to know, you are everything...(that i wanted.....i was longing....) these "()" emphasize backgroung voices,...it could be a song o a poem..... _________________ †Why do we fight wars,i told em we fought for what was right....but i soon realized there is nothing good about war but what we fight for in them† |
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Deathdarken Clan Leader


Number of posts: 62 Age: 20 Location: In the confinds of my mind Registration date: 2008-04-20
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 | Subject: Re: Deviantart Thu May 15, 2008 8:38 am | |
| | Snoopy wrote: | Surface
There's something inside me that pulls beneath the surface, Consume me.....(confusing).... I feel like this is never-ending towards me.... cant see....(cant breath)...
Is there anything out there that would make me happy?....(yerning for the...morning) Its like a self-control that i fear is never-ending.....(controlling...I cant see...) I cant find myself again,the walls are closing in.... I felt this way before..so insecure.....
My paths are sterning...(reaforming).... I want you to know, you are everything...(that i wanted.....i was longing....)
these "()" emphasize backgroung voices,...it could be a song o a poem..... | is it just me or does that have Linkin park written all over it?
here are the lyrics for all of you that don't know what I'm talking about
Crawling Crawling in my skin These wounds they will not heal Fear is how I fall Confusing what is real
There’s something inside me that pulls beneath the surface, Consuming, confusing, This lack of self-control I fear is never ending, controlling, I can’t seem, to find myself again My walls are closing in [without a sense of confidence I’m convinced There’s just too much pressure to take] I’ve felt this way before So insecure
Crawling in my skin These wounds they will not heal Fear is how I fall Confusing what is real
Discomfort, endlessly has pulled itself upon me Distracting, reacting Against my will I stand beside my own reflection It’s haunting how I can’t seem To find myself again My walls are closing in [without a sense of confidence I’m convinced That there’s just too much pressure to take] I’ve felt this way before So insecure...
Crawling in my skin These wounds they will not heal Fear is how I fall Confusing what is real
Crawling in my skin These wounds they will not heal Fear is how I fall Confusing what is real
(there’s something inside me that pulls beneath the surface Consuming,) confusing what is real
(this lack of self control I fear is never ending Controlling,) confusing what is real _________________ They say that I'm a monster Say that I'm a killer But I'm human until proven guilty-Deathdarken's lyrics
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arunathe Hokage


Number of posts: 162 Age: 15 Location: The Undying poet tree Registration date: 2008-04-24
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 | Subject: Re: Deviantart Thu May 15, 2008 9:05 am | |
| Wow,you know Linkin at the back of your hand.Yes,1/4 of it appeared and i just put it there _________________ †Why do we fight wars,i told em we fought for what was right....but i soon realized there is nothing good about war but what we fight for in them† |
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Deathdarken Clan Leader


Number of posts: 62 Age: 20 Location: In the confinds of my mind Registration date: 2008-04-20
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 | Subject: Re: Deviantart Thu May 15, 2008 9:09 am | |
| | Snoopy wrote: | | Wow,you know Linkin at the back of your hand.Yes,1/4 of it appeared and i just put it there | well besides minute to midnight yes I know that band fairly well I like that song and those lyrics sounded familiar but other then that it was good though _________________ They say that I'm a monster Say that I'm a killer But I'm human until proven guilty-Deathdarken's lyrics
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arunathe Hokage


Number of posts: 162 Age: 15 Location: The Undying poet tree Registration date: 2008-04-24
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 | Subject: Re: Deviantart Tue May 20, 2008 11:11 am | |
| (No Title) My life's like a roll of dice, snake eyes and sins turn me to a street mice. All paths linked to a painfull end, i'm caged up in the hate of them. Cant escape,cant breathe, smoke and drink so i can dream again. Wanna go to heaven,might end up in hell, I am forgotten and the one that fell. My sin is cold...as winter's kiss, i wont stop fighting,i'll use my fist. Never give up the old man said, Dont be so cold....just be the forgiven. _________________ †Why do we fight wars,i told em we fought for what was right....but i soon realized there is nothing good about war but what we fight for in them† |
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arunathe Hokage


Number of posts: 162 Age: 15 Location: The Undying poet tree Registration date: 2008-04-24
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 | Subject: Re: Deviantart Tue May 20, 2008 11:38 am | |
| My last Tear.....I'm here not knowing what to do, Guessing and thinking....i think of you. I'm here not knowing what to do, When I'm around you...I act like a Fool. My past is consuming me, the future confusing me. Denying the facts which amuse me, Expressing poems defuse me.... Like a messed-up negative pole, i repel all positive... dreaming but cant create, summers coming and i cant wait. This pain and suffering is alot to withstand, i want 'you' to be there and hold my hand. If thats to much to ask,its ok.... i'll be alone by myself,write my poems by a lake.... Its hard for me to act fake.... lying for some people,a piece of cake. As i learn more about us and life, live it to the fullest.....and i guess you'll be alright.... _________________ †Why do we fight wars,i told em we fought for what was right....but i soon realized there is nothing good about war but what we fight for in them† |
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arunathe Hokage


Number of posts: 162 Age: 15 Location: The Undying poet tree Registration date: 2008-04-24
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 | Subject: Re: Deviantart Tue Jun 17, 2008 12:07 pm | |
| I'm going to stand here, looking cute till' i'm noticed.... Isn't that all i should do, i guess thats my favourite thing. As adorable as i am, reckless in what i do, united with all my friends. never giving up.... always making people happy, to the final end, hoping to show my feelings... entrusting friends that fall. Thats my name for no on and no-one else can have it.....if you can read its present.... _________________ †Why do we fight wars,i told em we fought for what was right....but i soon realized there is nothing good about war but what we fight for in them† |
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